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I think that what you posted made a bunch of sense. However, what about this?

suppose you typed a catchier title? I mean, I don't want to tell you
how to run your website, but suppose you added a post title
to maybe grab people's attention? I mean LOCAÇÃO
DE EQUIPAMENTOS is a little plain. You ought to
look at Yahoo's front page and see how they write post titles to grab
people to click. You might add a video or a pic
or two to get readers excited about what you've written. In my
opinion, it might bring your posts a little livelier.