“ What you wrote was actually very reasonable.
But, what about this? what if you were to create a
awesome headline? I am not saying your content isn't good, however what if you added something that
grabbed people's attention? I mean LOCAÇÃO DE EQUIPAMENTOS is a little
boring. You ought to peek at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create post titles to grab viewers to open the links.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to get readers excited about
what you've got to say. In my opinion, it could make your posts a little
bit more interesting. ”